Words: Milardus
Milardus is derived from two Davan verbs: to milk (mila), and to do (dwa). ย The initial settlement was a cow farm. The owning family, ancestors of the current baron, eventually took the name as their cognomen.
Milardus is derived from two Davan verbs: to milk (mila), and to do (dwa). ย The initial settlement was a cow farm. The owning family, ancestors of the current baron, eventually took the name as their cognomen.
So, you’ve got your structure sorted, but there’s still something not quite right about your screenplay. It’s flat, it lacks the necessary OOMPH!, and the characters that are kicking arse in your head just seem lifeless and uninteresting on the page. Then it could be that you’re missing one or more of these basic elements that every scene needs:
A very interesting infographic, particularly if you’re having difficulty structuring your screenplay. I don’t entirely agree with it. For instance, the end of the second act should be the point where the protagonist can no longer go back to their former lives, but they are too afraid to go forward....